Coffee House Communion #Friday55 #FlashFiction

23 May

He had a voice made for smokey conversations:
in blues clubs,
in backrooms plotting crime over cards,
in bed–
whispering spells to part his lover’s thighs.

Her eyebrows were pale expressive lines,
sketching moods.
Her hands rendered emotion.
Gestures adding jiggle,
pert breasts completing sentences
with understated punctuation.

They left:
Coffee gone cold,
An aura of desire–
pulsing like caffeinated neon.

Source: via Nara on Pinterest


This post is my contribution to G-Mans Friday 55. Yeah, I’m a little early. I think Firday 55 posts go live around 8 PM ET? tonight. Or you can wait and check them out on Friday. I hope everyone has a lovely holiday. Be sure to drop by G-Man’s Friday 55 to join the fun or to see what others wrote.

Picture Credits: Black and white Cafe by Phish Pot on Pinterest,
Cooked to Order originally pinned by Aya Padron on Pinterest

You can find me, Nara Malone on Pinterest with handy little links right under my name that will take you to my Twitter, Facebook, and blog feeds.

10 Responses to “Coffee House Communion #Friday55 #FlashFiction”

  1. Sofie Couch May 23, 2013 at 10:48 am #

    Woah! Nara! You are the wordsmith MASTER! You win the prize today – the brass ring, the whole enchilada!

  2. G-Man May 23, 2013 at 6:55 pm #

    Nara Malone…..
    The prodigal Seductress returns!
    You raised the bar right from jump street tonight my friend
    What a passionate little tale
    Loved your steamy 55
    Thanks for playing, you sure have been missed
    Have a Kick Ass Week End
    G 🙂

  3. Margaret May 23, 2013 at 7:27 pm #

    Coffee gone cold… first good reason I have ever read for letting it do so!

  4. Janna May 23, 2013 at 10:01 pm #

    Favorite lines:
    “Pert breasts completing sentences with understated punctuation”

    “…pulsating like caffeinated neon.”


    Thanks for another Friday 55!
    Mine’s here.

    Mine doesn’t involve sex, though it does have naked antelopes.
    And bacon.

  5. brian miller May 24, 2013 at 4:18 am #

    caffeinated neon…nice..a singer and an artist
    bet they make art…hot little piece there nara..

  6. Mama Zen May 24, 2013 at 10:15 am #

    This is SO cool! I love every word.

  7. Teresa May 24, 2013 at 11:14 am #

    What a great 55! Love the romance!

  8. othermary May 24, 2013 at 12:34 pm #

    Who needs coffee? Nice one!

  9. nessa1313 May 24, 2013 at 5:54 pm #

    Very sexy. I need a cigarette.

    Flash 55 – and the green grass grew all around

  10. Raven May 31, 2013 at 8:18 am #

    Just getting around to looking at last weeks Friday’s.

    Definitely sexy. This could be the start of a beautiful friendship? I suddenly Humphrey Bogart would get reincarnated 🙂

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